My Promise To You

by Void   Dec 29, 2005


The sun starts to rise,
For morning is due.
I open my eyes,
To my dream come true.
Beside me you lie,
Peaceful and sleeping.
This god given sight,
The angel I'm keeping.
There's something I feel,
In the pit of my heart.
This is finally real,
We're no longer apart.
Silence so tranquil,
What beautiful time.
For you I am thankful,
Our love so devine.
Across the warmth of your cheek,
My steady hand glides.
Your resting body meak,
And to it I confide.
From my lips to your dreams,
My whispers will be heard.
Feelings inside gleam,
As I speak to you these words.
"My life only began,
The day that I met you.
And never will it end,
As long as we stay true.
The stars that shine above,
With the world it surrounds.
Show only a morsel of my love,
And the love that has been found.
A life time worth of sunny days,
Isn't enough for you to see
How our souls, together lay,
How much you mean to me.
No language can express,
But this promise I can make.
Each morning I'll caress,
This love I will not break.
With my time on earth, I swear,
To always be by your side.
To love, hold and care.
With every angle of heart's pride."
My promise has been spoken,
And a kiss had sealed tight.
My promise won't be broken,
Just hidden from your sight.

Hey, I wrote this for my boyfriend in hopes that I could get my love into words... Well I realized that I really can't. lol That was not as good as I wanted, but I can't make it much better as I have found that putting my feelings for him into words just can't happen. He will never know, but that is part of the promise I made in the poem - that even though I can't say it in words, I will try to show him for the rest of my life. Please comment, especially if you have any ideas to help me to express love better lol. Thanks so much!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Hey congratulations! You won my poetry contest with this amazing poem! When I read it knew immediately that you are the winner! It made me speechless!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    U just never Cease To Amaze me, Excellent poem, another One of those Speechless poem i cant even describe it, Great Great Great Work, Just really Good, i love reading your poems, 5/5 Of course, ttyl hopefully PeAcE

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow... i really like how you wrote this... it flowed well and had a lot of emotion... i dont really think there is much to improve on in this poem overall you did a very nice job

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    I know how it's sometimes hard to put your love for someone else into words but i think you did a magnificent job. But sometimes all that person needs to hear is simple to really show your love. Thanks for the comment on mine by the way :) It's always appreciated.
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Hun, this was an amazing poem. word for advice though do what you want. the poem is going to be yours. who cares what others think of it. it's your words your poem. I mean some people dis on my poems or give me 1's but i don't care because hey, i'm the one who wrote i'm the one who wanted it that way. Hun, this was an amazing poem and for your boyfriend i think you expressed all you had for him and if not keep on writing about it. keep on working at it. Let him see them because he doesn't want advice on a poem he wants your words. i hope that helped. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

    ps: thanks for the comment