The hurt is too much

by SoRrOwFuL Claire   Dec 29, 2005


PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE (in need of constructive critisism)

I hate this ugly feeling
The sheer emptiness
The raw jealousy
And spiteful bitterness

I hate my stupid heart
It's just so exposed
Its breaks easily like glass
It's going to explode

I hate my love struck head
It led me on and believed
That he really does like me
But it's so easily deceived

I hate my so-called friend
Who keep everything from me
Who then says, "I love him
And we are meant to be"

I hate it how she is
The boys just all love her
And how she flirts and touches them
I'm hurt over and over

I hate that beautiful guy
Who eyes are oh-so blue
Who led me to think
That my fantasies are true

I hate it how he told me
How they really feel
And how I told her the other day
My heart will never heal

I can't have love in my life
My heart has too many tears
I can't keep putting my self through this
I don't how much I can bear ...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow! I am really amazed! This poem is so beautiful! Your flow and rhyming are wonderful! I really liked the lines:

    "I hate it how she is
    The boys just all love her
    And how she flirts and touches them
    I'm hurt over and over"

    I can so realate to that stanza....Anyways keep up the awesome work! You definatly deserve 5/5!
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    ....... every poem of yours i become more and more impressed. honestly your poem speak to me more than my own do. well AMAZING poem, 5/5

    Never stop writing,
    Never give satisfaction,
    Love tiffani

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    That was really good I know how that person felt. xoxo Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by ToRnBtWeEn2320

    I really like the poem! it makes a lot of since!