Underneath The Sky

by Gesselle Valle   Dec 29, 2005


As we laid down on the sand
next to the shore,
we look at stars above
witnessing the beauty of our love.
Brilliant and beautiful,
so big and shiny
but neither could be compare to
the greatness of our love.
Underneath the sky-
you hug me as I cry.
Holding me in your arms
making me feel loved, completed and protected.
Sharing memories, hugs and kisses.
We've promise to never part,
to keep each other in our hearts.

The ocean, the stars, the moon...
they all became the witness of our love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poet

    Another well written poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, very well written, short but to the point. I loved it. The flow was good. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Diana Cardero ©♥

    That is soo sweet!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by FallenAngel44

    Hey it's me again
    That was pretty cool 5/5. u kno, u should write more poems & quotes. yur really good. thanx 4 the comment, it makes me feel good to kno that SOMEONE thinks my poems are still good.

    God Bless
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  • 18 years ago

    by Ken

    This is a beautiful poem Im putting you on my favorites list lol I cant wait to hear more keep up the good work no keep up the great work

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