I Wish

by Raven Roth   Jan 4, 2006


I wish you would disappear.
And never come back.
I never want to see you.
Never wanna hear your voice.

I wish the world would end.
I don't want to be around here.
I never want to see this place again.

I wish I was dead.
I never wanted to be born.
I want to die.
I know I'll never make it alone.

I will die someday and I hope it's soon.

I will never try to take my life but sometimes I really wish for these things.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Nice poem, Im loving the sheer hate in this poem, well done expressed nicely=) and thankyou for the comments they mean alot to me annnnnnnd! I hang out on neopets too!!!!! lol im a major dorky 16 year old but hey lol, my user name there is Canada02 =) w00t ttfn hunny keep it up and if you need anything you know how to find me

    Much Love
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    This poem is like you are just yelling at someone. It doesn't reflect the saddness that it should. Keep writing though. I really liked some of your others.

  • 18 years ago

    by NissY

    To be Honest, this one is missing on something, am not quite sure what it is... it overly states your emotions but babe I know you can do better.
    I read your other poems and they were great.

    Keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammi

    Excellent... I really liked that.