You slowly tear me apart

by just a poet   Jan 5, 2006


One again i know its not that good but the thing is it really was done in a d.t. lesson while teacher was talking so i wasn't paying much attention to what i was writing.

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you sit in d.t. glaring at me as i write this poem,
your hating my very being,
wondering why I'm being icy cold,
not knowing the truth to it all.

well tho you'll never read this rhyme,
I'll tell you why I'm sad,
I'll tell of how you hurt me,
and left me to break down.

you flirt with me one second,
and tho she says with me its different,
she doesn't see that you like her,
and that you see me as nothing but a play thing.

when you don't feel like it,
you stop with all the charm,
you become a twat without a heart,
and make me wish that i should die.

i wish you could stop glaring,
your braking my whole being,
you want me to talk to you,
but you won't even try to win me around.

you crush my feelings and my soul,
you play with my emotions till its dawn,
you make me feel like death is better,
than this light that fades away.

so while you sit there glaring,
I'm hurting oh so bad,
and when you find you've broken me,
you'll find that i am gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    This is soo sad , ur poem is very clear and understood dear, am so sorry if this is true .. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by aimee

    Thats so true about how alot of guys work don't let them bring you down

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg. I loved this... because I felt like I was right there and that it was all happening to me. If that makes sense =) But I really liked the way you wrote this, and I hope you're okay...
    This is my favorite part:

    and when you find you've broken me,
    you'll find that i am gone.

    Great job hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    I can feel your pain........

    i'm kinda hurting all over too, just in different ways and the same. you know how one little mistake ruins everything? it makes me cry... but i have to be strong and so do you! put a smile on your face, even when you want to cry, because you never know who's fallen in love w/ ur smile.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cherakee

    Your poeam is very unique dont ever say ur writen material is not good because its comming from ur heart and thats all that matters

    -chi chi