Unnerved Bunny

by Nici   Jan 6, 2006


That thing is so unnerving
All curled up in a ball
It just lies there, staring back at me
Back pressed against the wall
The eyes are never blinking
Always staring straight ahead
Its colours almost mouldy
And its skin has start to shed
Approaching it with caution
I turn my vacuum on
Aiming with the nozzle
Soon dust bunnys gone!

* Not really funny, but just a few lines I put together at work this morning.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stuart

    Hrm...interesting, you kinda lost me at place, but all in all, good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaklynn

    CUTE!
    I thought it was about a real bunny too. i was like, vacumm, NO YOU EVIL BEING! but then i realized and i laughed at my own stupidity.

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Sorry im not one for funny poems....i like this one b/c it was creative and it was somewhat funny also so 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    A light-hearted peice with a humorous touch. You captured the idea well, good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Hahahaha
    Dust bunnys I thought it was a real bunny. xD
    Thats good stuff

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