Notebook Jottings .. (haiku)

by ღ*KiM*ღ   Jan 7, 2006


A notebook Jotting
A look into a dark soul
Where the truth doth lie

A page of scribbles
Which release the truth inside
Emotions captured

The meaningless words
Form a picture of the mind
A notebook jotting

*unfinished*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Imogen

    Great start, I partically love the first verse 5/5 so far, but I'll wait till it's finished to vote ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was good.. all the syllable counts work.. but haiku's are traditionally about nature.. this was good though.. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really like it so far.

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