Hey guys! This has nothing to do with my personal life. If this is confusing or if I could do anything better, please let me know =) Thanks everyone!

I have seen death and human destruction without shedding a tear....but your poem made them come...beautifully written....powerful like a kick in the kidney...I don't know what to say...damn.

Omg!! this was beautifully written
so sad
you r very amazing at writing so keep up the good work top job

Hey huni i realli l0ve dis p0em u r s0o talented....g0d i luv the way u express urself keep up the great work... luv ya

0mg im s0 glad this has n0thing t0 d0 with ur pers0nal life. such a deep p0em. very heartfelt my g0d made my heart race l0lz. l0t 0f em-0ti0n in it. glad t0 read s0me 0f ur new stuff. cant wait t0 read m0re. h0pe u hae a w0nderful xmas and all the best f0r the new year. keep it up

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Wow this is amazing...so touching and the twist at the end is so unexpected. Great job, I loved every word of it. You're very talented. You left me in awe. Keep them coming!!!

::MELI::

Its really and incredible poem, its so well written and the twist at the end is heart renching. i am very glad that you wernt actualy writing about yourself, incredible job. thanks for sharing =)

Thanks for the comment, and i really liked ur poem. keep it up hun
~cait~

Touching and such a sad piece....truly brings tears from the heart.... great job,

Love ya, Ann~

Woah! This is very poweful, it really bought it home. Great writing!

That was a really good poem. keep up the good work

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

Beautiful poem! I love the way it sort of twists at the end. It's a story in poem form and it's amazing. Great job!

I LUVed this one!!!!!!! (lol)..i tried voting a 5/5 on it, but the stupid thang said i had already voted on it (which i haven't -GRR!)..so i dunno...it just wouldn't let me, but i LUVed it!! GREAT poem! ..n once again, i'm here to talk if ya want..take care! :) xoxo

So sad!!

Wow, powerful!! This is amazing, excellent write! Awesome ending!

Touchingingly sad. its so sinful. did this really happen? i hope it didn't. anyways... great job 5/5

It was a great poeam which i really enjoyed.... It gave me a clear picture of the scene and the emotions of this person. Well done! x

Hiya,,, really great poem,, loved the style u wrote it in,, and the ending,, keep doing what u do best,,

tata for now
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Wow good twist that was wikked really sad to :( awwwwwwwwwwww