Wanting something so bad can be such a dangerous thing. I like this poem I connected with it. Well done my dear

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Thats a really good one i love it

Ur poem was way kick ass hun!

I love this poem, i can tell your obviusly hurting from someone who has broken your heart, i no how y0o feel trust me i do, i have never felt so much pain in my life but i guess just keep living huni hopefully the pain will fade and life will go on, and you will meet someone who you will fall for, if it wasn't for love then this life would probably be pretty boring....well h0ld on and im always here 4 y0o....luv mAddy xxx

HEY another amazing poem...but trust me it may not seem like the right thing 2 do and may not feel true.. but everything happens for a reason and this lover may not be the 1...time will tell and 1 day when you meet the 1 you will no that death is not the answer...well take care...keep shining...loven always JoSiE....

'love came to me on raven wings' ouch! that reminds me - the raven's brought me that kind of love, too! Nice poem. very dark.

Oh my gosh... what a beautiful poem... I could really relate, and I loved the way you wrote this. You've got an amazing way with words, so I hope you continue writing!

This is a gret poem, really expressed yourself well

It's so sad!! Words have no limit when it comes to describing this poem. I have none, but know that I think this poem is awesome.

Not bad, still a great poem but not one of your best i think

I wanted you to kiss me,
But I taste of bitter tears''

I love the beat to those lines imparticular.

Lv A, x