Stop you're hurting me!

by Amanda   Jan 9, 2006


You're supposed to be my sister,
I should be looking up to you,
but when you hurt me badly,
I never know what to do,

The other night you scared me,
you grabbed me by the throat,
Slammed my head against the wall,
and ripped up my favorite coat,

You threw me down onto the floor,
slapping me hard around the face,
Said i didn't deserve a family at all,
you said I was a complete disgrace,

I begged for you to let go of me,
I screamed loudly for you to stop,
You'll be lucky if i talk to you again,
we're through, you pushed me to the top!

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

It's not that good but I'm really upset right now.

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  • 18 years ago

    by AmY

    Oh hun, that's really sad. i kind of fight with my sis and get really upset, but we don't even hit each other, just u know say some stupid things, and i thought it's only us, but after your poem, u understood that it's just nothing... anywayz, i'm really sorry for u hun. that is SAD! i am sure your sis will understand that she is wrong one day, but u gotta be patient and try to explain to her. but the poem was really great. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Aww babes.
    I cried, it is so sad.
    great poem even though it was really upsetting
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    love Tara-Kay

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    My sister never did this to me but my parents have....so i kinda unerstand this poem....very sad....i didnt much like the last line it didnt make much sence to me but oh well 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Releasing your feelings will help sweetie.....great job
    Love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem, you wrote it very well.

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