by Darien Jan 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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A Battle You Can't Win |
by 111308
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Amazing Job! You Always Have A Way Of Grabbing The Reader! AndI Always Enjoy Reading Yours :D Fantastic! 5/5 |
by Natalie
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This was different. :/ Really good though. I liked how you used it as soldiers and stuff. Sorry if my comments are really gay, I just don't know what to say, Cause all your poems are good. Lol.. =D 5/5 |
by martha shaw
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It says it all........nice!!!!5/5 |
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Your a good writer ive read a few of your poems so far and i like them |
by Razorblade
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Nice write! My favorite stanza is the second one. |