Said and Done

by Aidyn   Jan 10, 2006


A mount upon the sea
Tis where I wish to be
Tell nary one tis said and done
Heart locked there is no key

Atop this lonely hill
An age 'twere been, I will
For nary one tis said and done
My spirit, wherefore killed

And in such folly's blight
A foal's defeat of might
Still nary one is said nor done
Dark eyes bereft of sight

Tis naught can ease this pain
From forest mountain or plain
Ere nary one has said and done
The loss for none to gain

Never close yourself away...you won't find what you're looking for...

BTW--this is supposed to go to music--that's why the beats might feel a bit strange...if they are...

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~Amy~

    Great! i like it a lot! wow! the foot note on the bottom also says alot... u can't expect for things to happen if you're hiding yourself away from everything u want. i like your work a lot! keep it up
    ~Amy~

  • 18 years ago

    by erratic hippie

    Question: so do you compose music to go along with your work very often or is this a new development?
    *is keen to know*

  • 18 years ago

    by erratic hippie

    Is it wrong of me to be picturing bagpipes as part of the musical accompaniment? hehe..but seriously, i'm [once again] impressed - the whole 'tis', 'is', 'has' sequence brought a lot of depth to your concept (though i still found the comment at the bottom useful to interpret it)...*puts on a fractured english accent* bravo, good sir

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Coolies, will comment again later...Im sleepy!:P

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