Intermezzo di Vita

by Aidyn   May 21, 2006


For Elena

I find, dear heart, on this twisting road
My mem'ry of colours does forebode
The stagnation of awareness, still
My consciousness drifts to a lonely hill
And though I cannot reminisce
It is not for a lack of bliss
This interlude I see, it seems
Is only but a future dream
We'll lie, my love, on this mount, on high
Where the leaves sing an arcane lullaby
And with voices hushed by tongue-tied lips
With our each breath and every sip
We'll release our cares and strife
Side by side, in the middle of life

Now, to clarify--an intermezzo is a piece written as an intermission in a larger musical work. So, roughly translated from Italian, the title says "intermission of life"--love--an interlude that we all strive for. This is also meant to parallel "in the middle of life"...mezzo means middle, and again, horridly translated, intermezzo can mean "in the middle"...

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  • 16 years ago

    by ~Amy~

    Wow aidyn... you haven't been writing on here for a long time i can see, but then, neither have i! haha. Just in case you get this, This poem is amazing. don't stop, you've got a gift! don't waste it! I am impressed w/ how knowledgable you are on what you write. The "intermezzo" thing was such a great idea!!! GREAT JOB!!! hope you have fun on "this twisting road".
    ~Amy

  • 17 years ago

    by motley girl

    Wow........i have read this previously, but...this is INSANELY good! amazing poem, especially the outlook on love being some sort of a high place.it's an angle on love that is very unique.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    I think you've heard me say this but here it goes

    I hate couples ^_^ lol

    You and Lenny-dear are too cute, so muchs o that I hate you, and I hate you and your fuxxing amazing poetry, you make me look bad. Stupid uber arts kids *shakes my fist at you and Lenny* Anywho, I'm glad you too finally got together. I'm so happy to see you both so....happy 0_o lol keep it up and just know with writing poems for your girlfriend you set a certian standard lol =] I love you both

    Jenny

  • 17 years ago

    by erratic hippie

    Wow...my jaw might dislocate itself from grinning..

    this is so lyrical and tender that i must reverberate all those lit kid fist-shakes right back at you, my dear

    *does so with an insuppresible smirk*

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