I surrender

by coupon can   Jan 12, 2006


Another broken promise
My soul is in pieces
Torn by the lies you said
Broken by the mistakes you made
Regretting what I am
Regretting what I feel

This game you played
You have played it before
And I knew that
Blinded by this obsession
Blinded by this love
I played this game with you

I put my soul
My silly heart
My silent thoughts
My unwanted love
All I have
And all I had

Good luck
I'm gone
Forever
I'm out of this game
Hope you had fun
I surrender

You win
I lose
Take my love
Take my heart
Take my tears
And take my life

*Its not my favorite one but i kinda like it...idk...i wanna know what you guys think..plz comment*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    IT SUCKS! I HATE IT!

    (in the UPSIDE DOWN world lol)

    i understand what u mean with this poem..lol i still have eyeliner on my eyes. "not" great work in this poem hahaha i'm so bored right now...today: dosis of psycho attacks

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by shelby

    Good job....that was a great poem....i love your writings...they pretty much can relate to anyone because everyone has broken hearts....but they are AWESOME!!! keep up the good writings and thanks for commenting on my poems..i wrote something back to u on them!!!
    later

  • 18 years ago

    by Whitney

    Ok that poem was great..........but I am a little freaked out by it lol......bc I was actually about to write a poem about the same as urs about havin a guy playin with ur feelings and everyone knowin he was an ass but u being blinded and lettin it happen then today I realized I was such an idiot and I was like ok I am done playin ur game........lol wow that is so weird that somehow I got brought to this poem especially when I just experienced it today...omfg! weird

    anywho I loved ur poem it def. went with what I am feelin rite now

    Keep writing!!

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