I think this poem is one of ur best , in so few words u have spoken so much .
Ur words interpret ur pain very well .

Best wishes
chavii.

Short but well written. Well done
and thanks for the commentonmine
tara-kay

Hi Nitin
well i must say it is short but so deep.
i liked the way of writing
keep it up dear!!!!!! 5/5
take care

Bharti

Awwwwwwww i loved it i feel the same wow great poem!!!!!!!!!thanks for the comment!!!!!!!!!

Hi Nitin,

NOOO... don't fade away.. Ha.. only kidding..

Loved the way it was short yet so deep... Agreeing with Chavii, I must say this one is probably your best work yet...

Much love,
Ipsita

Wow, when I first saw the length of it, I have to say - I wasn't expecting much. But that was amazing. Great job, nicely written and a nice set up. I hope to read lots more from you! 5/5

AWSOME!! I loved it. I think that you expressed your feelings well. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Its awsum!! i love ur work!!

Its awsum!! i love ur work!!

Hey!
well, in a few short lines you have said so much. A skilled writer, that is you. Well, I must say keep it up. and dont fade away!!!!!! :P lol
xoxo Monique

Woah. Thats something new [well atleast for me ]. I think that poem is great.

OMgosh.. I love love love it. Seriously, it's short and simple but the emotions are very touchable, real and great! well done...

love,
~* TasH *~

Awsome poem. So short yet so deep. I love your poems. They are all soooo deep. I very much appreciate deepness.

Short simple concise and full of feeling. very good.

5/5

This was short but had so much meaning behind it. I loved how it ended, it really fit in well. I think this has got to be one of your best pieces :) Awesome work.

Nitin
Excellent style. Word choices are great. This is so touching. It hit me right in the heart.

Life
stood still till i turned gray
Love
just never came my way
And I
fade away
fade away

These lines were really heartfelt.
Hope love comes your way. I pray you never fade away.
Love Cindy