Goodbye

by *Amber Faith.* ©   Jan 15, 2006


I try to express the way I feel,
The way I tell you, you say its not real.

So many things are running through my head,
All of these thoughts of being dead.

I know you see the scars on my wrist,
I'm sorry I have to hurt you like this.

I hate myself and hate my life,
This will be my last breathe in your sight.

So this is my goodbye,
maybe I will see you when you die.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Another good poem! i especially like the end where you say:
    So this is my goodbye,
    maybe I will see you when you die.

    could you mayb comment on some of mine?

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I liked it..a lot!!! well done!!

    keep writing

    Lonelynow xxxxx

    p.s. my poem was true, like all my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by last_petal

    It's a nice poem. I liked it....

  • 18 years ago

    by melinda

    Veyr good poem. i really liked it, it had alot of emotion in it! great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by LyricalFlow

    Wow!! Great poem, great job, great great great..... Loved the flow of it
    5/5

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