Sweet Suicide

by *Amber Faith.* ©   Feb 26, 2006


Silently I sit and cry,
Silently I want to die.

Loudly I scream out your name,
Loudly I curse about my pain.

Softly I ask myself why he done this,
Softly I tell myself no one will answer.

Things shouldn't have happen like this,
Things shouldn't have caused this much bliss.

I'm hurting and I know you see my pain,
I'm grabbing the knife and the blood causes a stain.

My head is shaking because what I have just done,
My hands are still cutting and now he should know he has won.

Dying on the inside,
Dying on the outside.

The pain has now been put aside,
with sweet suicide.

** Please comment,
&& this poem is not about me. I just made it up at the top of my head. I know its not the greatest but still, tell me what you think. **

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  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    Really great poem.. u really express emotion of this person committin suicide really well.. and i really like this bit of the poem,

    Softly I ask myself why he done this,
    Softly I tell myself no one will answer.

    aww... i know how that feels.. great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by celi

    Very sad, but still a great poem!! you may not think its very good but it is! by the way, i also wanted to say that your quotes are AMAZING!!i really love them! i cant wait to read more of your poems,so i put you in my favorites (i hope you dont mind, lol), 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    I really liked it alot! It held alot of emotions and somethings I could relate to it! Vey nice work!!

  • 18 years ago

    by m i s s k a t e l y n

    This poem is great it might not be about you but people really feel this way I know I do I have thought about ending my pain that way

    ~BlondeSadness

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Great poem! I have a poem about suicide which you can check out and maybe comment *PLEASE* lol! Anyway, this poem is well writen with the rhyming and pattern. Its easy to read, each verse runs into another softly and smoothly which i love in a poem! A big Well done! Lots of love, Rosie XxX

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