Fading away

by Amanda   Jan 20, 2006


My face is pale,
my body is weak,
I cannot cry,
nor can i speak,

Can't work it out,
what is wrong,
I've been like this,
for too long,

Is it lack of food?
or even sleep?
or is it my thoughts?
are they too deep?

Whatever it is,
I don't know today,
I'll find out tomorrow,
before i fade away.

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

Haven't got a clue why I wrote this. Yes it's about me although it's not very good but thanks for reading it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very strong emotional peice.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Don't ever doubt your talent sweety, this poem is so good, so deep and emotional....Writing is the best way to get our emotions out =0) Love you sweety and I can relate to your pain,I know where it's coming from.

    Hugs Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h hun yer l0t 0f em0ti0n in this p0em. very heartfelt. hun u are a g0od writer this 0ne was g0od t0o =) h0pe ur 0hk

    l0ve always d0ra
    *-x00o00x-*

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda
    Anything you write is good, don't you ever doubt that....emotional write....

    love ya, Ann

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