Slip

by cuttingsherpleasuredeathishergame   Jan 21, 2006


The cuttings getting worse
I dont care about anything anymore
I'm so full of pain
And I'm slipping further into depression.

Maybe I should slip into the water
And drown myself,
Meet death
In the watery grave.

Maybe I should slip the blade in real deep
And bleed to death,
Meet death
In the puddle of blood.

Maybe I should slip the rope around my neck
And slowly run out of air,
Meet death
As I hang limp.

Maybe I should slip some pills
And die of an overdose,
Meet death
As I lay limp.

this is one of my more intense poems & im very proud 2 have made this 1

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Catastrophe

    I really like this one. i can definetly relate.
    if you need someone to talk to im listening.

  • 17 years ago

    by hopeless08

    This poem is great. Sad, but well written and great words.

    ~hopeless~

  • 18 years ago

    by TearsLeftUndried

    Yea, I can like so relate to this poem. Sometimes i think about that stuff...well yea. By the way, thanks for the comment!

    ~*~Elisha~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Crator

    Very powerful and well written poem. I understand what your feeling and thinking. (if this is true). 5 out of 5

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Wanna-be Poet...

    Wow, I can definitely see why you're proud of that one. It's exceedingly powerful and moving. I love it =]

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