Field of Clover

by Lost Soul 691   Jan 22, 2006


Whispering breezes
calling my name
spin around searching
but it's all in vain

leaves falling, twigs snapping
quick stroll down our path
rivers edge beckons
with calls from our past

turn left, then turn right
run fast through the field
checking for clover
could you be over here

heart pounding, tears flowing
I've looked all around
legs weak, throat burning
I sink to the ground

where are you hiding
why did you have to go
I'm looking for answers
can you help oh dear lord

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  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Sad, but good. It made me feel... Well, I don't know. It just made me feel.
    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Thanks bunches. I must say that I'm a bit partial to this one myself. Even though it is sad, it does bring a smile to my face in remembering the good times and the good places.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow..that was just so deep...deep...deep, i really like such poems a lot & its been long since i read any...great poem indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Thanks Bogie, your comments mean a lot to me. Yes, it was the loss of my love, this past December, which has gotten me back into writing after many years.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, I do believe I have a tear
    in my eye. A glorious poem written
    from a truly heart felt experience of
    loss and lived out emotions.

    I love you poem a lot. I think it relates to
    a loss of a lover, family member and/or
    close friend.

    Keep the great write alive excellent job,
    Bogie

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