Good Bye Forever

by DevilWithin   Jan 22, 2006


There was a girl who was adopted at the age of four
When she was born her mother left her at the door
She was very shy and had a hard time understanding
When she got her little bits of food she would be left standing

This girl worked and worked hard all day with no fun or play
she always felt miserable and sad how they pushed her all the way
when she would finally go to bed bruised and battered all was she
She would lay on her bed and dreaming of a day she will be free

she was sick of being slaved all over this was her only way
she is going to run way from this and she is going to say
I'm sick tired of cleaning all day being treated like a slave
I listened to you and respected you know i must be brave

She took everything she had owed in a little sack
she kept on walking and walking never to look back
she walked until she found the bus stop and sat
she sat alone miserable yet happy with no one to chat

when the bus have finally came she paid with what she had
she paced slowly sat in the back took out her writing pad
and started to write down a poem surviving struggled of her life
she jotted down how she almost died one dark night with a knife

all she can remember is cleaning so much she could hardly eat
she had a life of struggles and that her whole life was incomplete
how she would cry almost everyday having a heart to be torn
she always wonder who would help her heart be sown

I might add more but this all right know thanks for reading it, xo Rach

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  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Hey!!!
    great poem. v.sad but i felt the emotion.
    keep writing!! love jess XXXX

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    Hey this is nice,, very nice, i loved it,, its very original,, good one,, 5/5,, lots of lovin,,
    **doz an1c me**

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Awwwwwww
    Like I said..
    Reminds me of a Cinderella story.
    I love the melancholy....just tragically beautiful.

    Loved it! great write!

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