Conclusion to a boy and a girl

by Bethan   Jan 25, 2006


So the boy and the girl parted,
The girl went on to perform great feats,
But she never forgot her first love,
and for him her heart still beats,

The boy however couldn't take anymore,
He waited till his family were away,
then hung himself from the light fitting,
He was found like that the next day.

After this incident the girl broke down,
and felt guilty for many years,
If she'd just stayed with him,
Wouldn't he still be here?

He left her a note,
the note simply said,
I love you,
But without you, I'm better off dead.'

So, the girl cried and mourned her loss,
And five years later she was wed,
She was happy but sometimes she'd think of her boy,
and her heart was filled with dread,

For although she'd loved him completely,
and knew he didn't love her as much,
She longed for a second chance,
For it was her heart his love had touched.

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  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    I just wanted to read and read more about this poem until it came to the conclusion. I was sitting on the edge of my chair hoping he wouldnt kill himself. it's sooo sad! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by justine mccain

    Wow dat poem was sad but great you have a good way of working with your words. you should have a future in poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hhhh great. all 0f them were beautiful and t0uching with heartfelt lines. each p0em t0uched my heart, thank u s0 much f0r ur c0mment 0n my w0rk. it means s0o much t0 me..y0u t0o keep up the great w0rk

    l0ve always d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Compelling! powerful! Passionate! well done love. Another great fitting to the selection. I love the story being told. its very informative, and is told with great grace and creativity.

    Brad xXxXxXxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Charles

    Wow, what a climatic conclusion. i think it was very wise of u, 2 put this conclusion in, because it shows u wanted to bury these charactres once and 4 all. thanx 4 da comment u gave me. ma uncle died of cancer 3 months ago, but da poem wasnt bout him, it was 4 all those ppl suffering out dere
    love charlz

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