Big girls dont cry

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Jan 26, 2006


I'm so sad and it hurts real bad it was like a knife cutting my troat and pushing in too deep.

You told me i would always be in your life look at me now i think about it all night and wondering how it got this way.

As the days fade in and out i try not cry or make a sound cause i am proud and big girls don't cry.

I try to stand tall and nothing u do is gonna make me fall cause I'm a big girls and big girls don't cry.

Is OK may i have a razor blade kiss.It only makes the pain more intense yet this is my defense.

It hurts so bad but feels so good the blade is tiny and thin .

i cut straight down yet i am still proud i ask one more question before i go and fade away.

Are u finally proud of me I'm a big girl i didn't cry yet i wanted to die.
You've got your wish i have no more fears and shed no tears.
because big girls dont cry

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Okayy, first of all I want to say I liked your use of words. Your grammar was not very good, though. I'd go back and proof read and correct all of the mistakes.

    I'm so sad and it hurts real bad it was like a knife cutting my troat and pushing in too deep.
    ^^Troat should be throat.

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    May i have a razor blade kiss.It only makes the pain more intense yet this is my defense

    ^my favorite stanza.Very good!

    <3Amber

  • 18 years ago

    by dancer

    Another great poem loved it............

    xoxo
    allana

    p.s just one thing you spelt throat troat but know worries its still a good poem :)

  • 18 years ago

    by *fading*away*

    ***I loved this poem...it was full of hurt yet there was strength in it too...a beautiful poem! Keep Writing!***
    PS Thanks for commenting on my poem!

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