Wow that was awsome... good job

Ooh dude! this is such a great poem, is has all the great aspects of an amazing poem, and YOU (from what i've seen) have all the great aspects of a great writer. i hope things get better...because i know how you feel.

Awww..... this is a really good poem. it was just great. i loved it so much. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

It seems like you could almost put this poem into a song. I can relate to this 100 percent, im here if you need me.
excellent work.

Rejected - this word/feeling always hurt a lot and u hv just xpressed it beautifully..
really loved it
great work

all the best and take care

Amazing poem, so deep and I can relate so much to it!!! I really enjoyed reading it, but it made me sad to think about the pain you must go through, I go through the same....Keep up the great work =0)

Hugs Sabrina

This poem was so good
Going unnoticed ...
So many people feel that way
but what no one realizes is that theres always someone noticing you secretly ..
xD just trying to help. :)
Love Always
--NerdyPants--

Oh, this seems like you are a cutter? I am... but anyways, great poem!

Again well-said. I'm deeply moved by the end's projection.

Wow, i can relate so much it's scary! excellent poem, hun. 5/5. keep up the good work, stay strong.

Great use of imagry, I liked how you used "Crimson Tears fall from my veins" to indicate that pain was borne from sorrow, anywho good job

Alyson,
Great poems. I love them. Nice job.

Very expreesive and well written dark poem

Wow awsome write, I can relate, 5/5

Sometimes cutting isn't always the answer.. I know how you feel though since I used too... But it's still amazing.. It sounds like you really put your heart into this one...
!^i love being in love^!

Great poem!

Amazing poem 5/5
deep , touching & so well written...
i've got a similar poem
murder or suicide
pls vote & comment & i'll come back and read some more of urs...
keep it up
love
amy

This is really good.. comment on my new one sometimes.. thanks keep up the good work..

Wow..that was amazing..nice job.. i love it..5/5

thanks for sharing
keep you head up
shannon

Great job. i liked the poetic imagery and how you so originally described this. keep it up.
as always~kate