Welcome the Embrace

by Lost Soul 691   Jan 27, 2006


Everyone needs a moment
to hide for self reflection
but dangers lurk for those
lingering long in retrospection

push apart the branches
yell "darkness go away"
for sunshine will still reach thru
the denseness of the trees

shake away the cobwebs
yell "spider spin elsewhere"
for dewdrops will still sparkle
on other coverings to unveil

kick hard at the stones
yell "move out of the way"
for rains will still wash over
turning pebbles into grains

new life is all around you
bursting forth on it's own
magical moments will unfold
just turn unto it's embrace

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    That was lovely! its a really uplifting poem. it was a bit confusing though, for your first stanza rhymed, yet the others didn't. i enjoyed the language used. it gave more cepth to the poem.

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Loradess

    Awesome Work. You are very insightful on a lot of aspects.

    Ps. THank for your comment it ment lots.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow...absolutely amazing!!! i love the message... and i especially love the first stanza. very deep. thanks for your comment, it means so much :D keep up the excellent work!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderdful penn, phenomenal job!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautiful thoughts that flowed so perfectly. i love the message that your poem portrays.

    god luck and peace
    shobhana

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