I Love You Baby, Can You Tell?

by Brigitte   Jan 27, 2006


Can you see right through me?
Can you see my heart miss a beat,
Every time you speak?
I love you baby, Can you tell?

Every day I await your calls.
With you I'm never afraid to be me.
You wipe away my tears when I get stung by a bee.
I Love you baby, Can you tell?

We confide in each other,
Long into the night.
You're always calming my frights
I Love you baby, Can you tell?

You never laughed at my dreams
You supported them all,
And told you'd catch me if I ever did fall.
I Love you baby, Can you tell?

Your eyes are of silky blue
From them kindness flows
When I need you, your heart is never closed.
I Love you baby, Can you tell?

The way your hair looks when you first awake,
A squishy bunch of curls,
But your sheepish smile shines out like pearls .
I Love you baby, Can you tell?

The way you sometimes hold my hand
Tightly coiled in-between your own
We're like two pieces of material waiting together to be sown.
I Love you baby, Can you tell?

But most of all,
I love when you whisper in my ear,
Those sweet poisonous words that make my heart tear.
I Love you baby, Can you tell?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I agree with Sole but osme of the lines seemed a bit over done. I mean, it could stand out like your other poem about the flower did. But it just seemed lost to me. I liked it, though

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    I think that the repetition of
    'I Love you baby, Can you tell?'
    Is very effective - but why is there a capital L on Love and C on Can? If you were personifying Love, then understandably it would have a capital, but you're not. So I suggest you take away those capitals. Your

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    Rhyming pattern worked really well too, great poem.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    I like it the repetition of the phrase I Love You Baby, Can't You Tell?

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