Once more

by Brigitte   Jan 27, 2006


You’re my little piece of happiness
And right now it’s you I miss.
You slammed the door with words so cold
And from you tongue hatred rolled.

You said I was a mistake
We were nothing but a fake.
Tears rolled down my cheeks
You were far from being meek.

But it’s still you I miss
Please stop shaking your fist.
Can’t you see I’m dying inside?
It hurts so badly that you lied.

We were supposed to be together for life
You cut that short with a knife
I’m lost without you by my side
Forever with you, I want to be tied

I can’t help it,
From cupid’s arrow I was bit.
I can’t stop thinking about us,
Sorry if I’m making a fuss

Please listen to me,
I wish I could set my heart free,
But without you I march to the wrong beat,
Even with all your past cheats.

Please just give me one last kiss,
One last fling of peaceful bliss.
I love you so much
And I can’t live without your one last touch.

So take me in your arms,
And take my heart over with your charms.
Just hold me once more,
Before my heart shatters to the floor.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Definatly not one of your better ones, but still good in its own way. you seemed to be struggeling with your rhymes as you got farther along in the poem. remember a poem doesn't have to be long, its best to keep it short and simple, as to not lose the idea, or emotions. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I loved this one. It was really good. The rhyming wasn't forced, It all flowed in well! Fav line;
    "Just hold me once more,
    Before my heart shatters to the floor."
    Really great way to end the poem. Awesome job!! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think it was a pretty alright poem. It was sad and heartfelt but rhyming isn't really my type of thing. I could find nothing wrong with it except you were missing an r in one word.

  • 17 years ago

    by gemowski

    Wow this has got to be my favorate one, it abb fab.
    keep up this great work hun.

    gema xoxoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww! love this poem! so prettyy.. and i lik how it rhymed! :) thnxx for bein put on ur favourite's! ur on mine too :P lol.. keep it up!
    jessy

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