No Words

by LOVEmeNOT   Jan 28, 2006


What can I say if there are no words,
There is no one by my side to help me
Along this life of mines. Everyone just
Say they love me when they really don't.
They leave me all alone in a house to suffer
With just no one by my side. That just has
Me have so many thoughts go through my
Mind. Why this? Why That? Why doesn't
Anyone listen but a piece of paper that I
Call my one and only true friend. Its there
To listen and to not say a word about my wrong
Mistakes, It helps me breathe knowing I
Let everything out even if it wasn't to
Anyone's face. No words is what I can call
Home, its all I hear day in and day out. There
Is nothing to explain my pain, nothing to
Explain what has happened, nothing to
Explain anything in my life. Unless I can
Find it on my own, but if no one else has
A clue, how can I find the answer. No
Words is also what I can tell myself,
No words to tell me anything, no words
To let me know. So what can I say if no
Words are always there, there is no way
Out of it but to just forget. But to forget
It hurts. It turns me insane, knowing I
Don't know a thing, when I really should.
I can't go anymore without any words, there
Can be no way I will live through this horrible
Pain. No words, I can't handle anymore because
With words comes no pain and lets me handle
Everything, lets me share all my pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    It's decent: Are you an emotional writer? If you are and tend ot base off your emotions then this is really good because it helps heal those pesky scars and build your self-esteem but if you want to be more of a poetic writer, this is the best place to start:

    Break up your poem into different stanza's, it's easier to read and it helps improve the flow. It doesn't have to be structured, free verse is good.

    Emotions are the best, but you can help add more details to explain why you feela certain way with descriptions or metaphors. For example, "What can I say if there are no words" could be, "I'm silent for words vanish into the air."

    Grammar is a personal choice, it works with and without it.

    Read poetry, different styles, different thoughts, seeing is how you can improve what you think could be better, not by stealing ideas, which I'm not saying you would of course, but by saying, "I could do better than that." and striving to get better than the person you had read.