Wow....very powerful and unique! I'm loving every single line of this poem. Great job, you have lots of talent! Take care and many hugs for you.

A touching and heartfelt ode to the love of another....beautifully done.

Oh wow, thats such a beautiful poem! i loved it, it was full of emotion. 5/5, keep up the great work, and thanku so much for the comments,
take care,
xxEmmaxxx

It is your emotions that make this poem stand out. lovely once again!

love and luck
shobhana

Wow,im speechless , that was such a lovely poem , 5/5keep it up

Great poem! I could feel the longing, the need, beautifully conveyed! Nicely done!

That's a wonderful poem, your very talented

REALLY AMAAZING! I LOVED IT!!

A touching and heartfelt piece, very powerfull good job

Simple, but expressive, capturing emtioons and feelings. You had a good rhyming pattern that didn't feel forced. Great job!

-Tainted Mikochan

Good poem

Loved this poem got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun sarah x