Breaking it apart

by Switchblade89   Feb 1, 2006


I gave you my heart,
I gave you my soul,
but then over time,
you started to control,
my every move,
causing me not to see,
That the person that was best,
was indeed, not in front of me,

You couldn't be her,
there's just no way,
a thousand deaths I'll die,
and forever I'll pray,
cause I can't take this anymore,
You trying to control my life,
it's getting to my head,
I'm about to stab myself with a knife,

I wonder why I thought you were perfect,
and also why I thought you'd be the one,
if all you do is hate and rip,
my heart out just for fun,
I guess it's my mistake,
for thinking that you'd ever be true,
so now I'm Breaking this apart,
and I'm going to live on without you....

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*WoW ur a really great writer i love ur stuff, well keep it up*~ XoXo

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    All my every moves? (in the first verse. lol) lay
    -flava-

  • 18 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    That was a really good poem I liked it alot keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The heart the soul the love

    So i'm guess you wrote this one for me so hey i hear you loud and clear i'll back off

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Wow Robert this is really good...Im sorry if ur heart was broken..remember i am here for you if u ever wanna talk....I could feel the emotion and i find it beautiful yet sad..Great Job...Your Friend Joclyn