My Final Goodbye

by Synh   Feb 1, 2006


I can feel your presence
But not as it has been
The warm aura I had felt
Is gone, your light dims

I whisper your name
It comes about every now and then
But it has lost its meaning
The love is gone again

In my dreams you stalk me
Your voice so pure and clear
Now it's tainted with the sound of lies
Silence is all I hear

My minds troubled by your face
It blinded me from reality
Truth is you're a deceitful person
Yet you still haunt my memory

Why did you say it
Why say it if it's not true
Why say you love me
Why do the things you do?

I'm done with you
I've no more tears to cry
I have one last thing to say
It's my final goodbye . . .

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. thats so sad.. i loved the ending, it was magically sad.. keep writing your amazing poems!
    jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really powerfull, nice imagry.. good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Again another poem about sad love, another gripping poem
    Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    My minds troubled by your face
    [I think you mean mind's]

    It's a beautiful poem, yes, and other than that one thing I can't find anything wrong with it. The organization is just great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Beautiful. It really captures the reader as you go through it - it flows really well too :)

    Peace. [Sole]