LoVe

by MaSkEdSoUl   Feb 2, 2006


Love,
Could This Be What I'm Feeling?
Everytime I See You,
I Start To Smile.
Everytime I Think About You,
I\'d Wish You Were With Me.
Everytime We Kiss,
I Get Tingly All Over.

Love,
Could It Be This Strong?
Could It Make You Want To Scream At The Top Of My Lungs Out Of Joy?
Does It Make You Want To Dance For Joy?

Love,
It Must be What I'm Feeling,
'Cuz When ever I'm With You,
Nothing Matters,
No One Is There But You,
No One Makes Me Feel The Same Way You Do.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    In all your poetry so far it seems like you not putting any great effort into it...and it feels as if you are just blurting out what ever you feel at the time and organizing it into stanzas...
    work on your flow and ryhmn and you will definitly get much better!Good work though

    ~Retniapdoolb~

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice job, clearly written to the point. You can try adding more imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Great job. Very imaginitive way of expressing yourself.
    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Really good. 5/5.

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