Ruptured (Double Acrostic)

by DBM   Feb 2, 2006


Running, my frigid heart beating fasteR

Until all of my problems melt away, including yoU

Past civilization, past organization, past helP

Tomorrow, nothing will be changed, nothing differenT

Under the eyes of the world, this sickening flU

Remains, festers, awaiting its chance to horribly maR

Everyone sees it, but won't believe it to bE

Disgusted, I escape from the sickness, before we're all deaD

*~*~*

Again, this is me experimenting with new poetry styles... this one is actually a LOT harder than it looks...

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I'd say it's hard. I never thought of doing a double acrostic.
    Anyway, the poem is superb. Nice flow and great word play, nicely done.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This one's good, I admire you for trying out new styles, and most of all succeeding. Well done,
    Talk to you sometime soon,
    *VioletRaven*