What You've Become

by Taylor Anderson   Feb 4, 2006


I'm terrified
Of these two eyes,
Looking through the mirror
At what I've become...

I dream of you,
It's the only thing I have left
You look through the mirror
And see what you could have been...

We are meant to be,
Yet you ignore me
Continue to pretend you are all alone
And die from the pain
You inflict on yourself
Yet live off your depression...

Save yourself
When no one else can
Stop the blood
Only you can control the knife
Yet you give it up
You let death take over
Look in the mirror,
And see what you've become...
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This is a lot more simple than any other poem I've written-I like the style

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  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Good format, I really enjoyed this poem, I can relate to it alot so thats probably a big part of it, keep it up! 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Hey! I like the style also, great poem, it was a good read, I'm sorry I don't have a lot too say, I'm new at this commenting thing, I like the poem. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This is really good. I don't really have much to say, it was pretty long, so I liked it, the ending was awesome in my opinion. Good job. Nothing to say.

    Keep up the good work.

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