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This was the poem that I submitted for my english coursework it got me an a* which was good...

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Tortured and Tormented
Fatally close to Death
Ripped at the Seams
Slowly Fading Away
Drifting into an Empty Dream
Falling into a Pit of Nothingness

Crying Those Mascara Tears
Cascading Down to the Ground
Drowning in a Pool of Hate
Hanging onto Life
With one Single Thin Thread
Praying it won't Snap

Watching the River of Crimson Flow
The Never Ending Scars
Telling Her Story of Life
Gripping the Black Rose Tightly
Prickling Deep Within
Hate Quickly Rising

Life Slowly Spiraling Out of Control
Losing Her Place in this World
Failing to Understand the Hurt
Left Jaded and Morbid
Pain Boiling Within
Rotting in a Place Called Hell

She's Pleading for Help
Begging at the Knees of Satan
Asking for Forgiveness
Sinking to the Ground
Surrounded by Demons of her Past
Hostility Closing in on Her

Too Many Burdens to Bare
Burning Deep Inside
Imperfections Gradually Being Exposed
Her Mask Starting to Ebb Away
Death Lingering in Her Doorway
The Light Getting Dimmer

Breaking Away From Everything she Knows
Fear Taking Over Her
Can't Take it Anymore
Distrubed by the Scathing Pain
Scratching Away at Her Tainted Soul
Won't Anyone Save Her?

A Wreckage of a Troubled Girl Soon Laid There
Heart Cold as Stone
Black as the Night Sky
Blood Draining From Her Body
Leaving Her Pale and Raw
Robbed of Her Faith