Once again

You know what they say , hearts are made to be broken ,

gods way to say to give us a taste of heaven and hell same time, heaven when i am with my loved one and ehll when i am not ,

i know this, more and more , time after time , ti get harder to get up and carry on ,

and each time , my heart gets broken , i lose a part of me along the way , i can not find all the pieces to put them together ,!

but i know i dont need all my heart together i know i can still love!!

Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^

That is good poem, well expressed and it flows so nice, well, i think that a feeling thats every1 had experiance to fall in love with some and give all heart to him,but then eventually he broke your heart and itd real sad to break with some1 u love though nothing you can do- practice what you preach.

Neat poem, i'm going to be honest, probobly not my favorites of the ones of yours that i've read. The rhyming feels awquard. Maybe make the lines longer and don't rhyme as much :P. Parts of it sound like one of those raps where the rapper is trying to rhyme every other word and eventualy runs out of things that rhyme and make sense so he gets stuff like:

I'll sing to my grave
And cook my microwave
Oh a lifeguard i did save
then we partied at a rave
Where i hired a purple slave
And we all did the wave
Then i said hello to dave
Then i went home to shave

Sorry i got a bit carried away with that:P

Good poem i think you might have gone a bit overboard with the rhyming although not as much as i did above lol. Stilll like it though 4/5

Hey this one is good it ryme good