Make believe world

by Ashley   Feb 9, 2006


This was all make believe
you were never really there
you lied and cheated,
and once again i believed it

but now you're here,
and now your sorry
how can i deny you
how can i say goodbye to you?

you're all i ever wanted,
but i blame myself
I'm no good for you
find someone else

i know what i must do
to help you stay away
and on my last day
ill push you away

and as the blood drips down my arm
& the darkness surrounds me
i see your eyes,
and i whisper my final goodbye

i was going to fix it, change a few lines and make it better, but honestly. i can\'t look at it anymore... cause all i want is him.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Johnathan Shrum

    Hey ashley thats a good poem i really liked it it also sounds about like what im going through

  • 18 years ago

    by beth

    Hey, I like the poem. As I read it it kinda reminded me of something my sister went through. (this is one of your best poems I think)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Hmm love this poem! it's really deep and I can relate to it very well!
    I like your writingstyle in all of your poems but this one in particular, Keep up the good work, =D I'll read some more of your work. Thank you for commenting on my poem.

    Much love, Ashley.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Great poem I love it! It's so deep and I an tell he means alot to you! Good Job. 5/5

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