THIS WILL BRING A TEAR TO YOUR EYE...

by bethan   Feb 10, 2006


True story!!!!!!

Girl: mum its my best friends 18th party , luke is going to be there and I really want to go. can I go?

Mum: no I have told you Luke is trouble you shouldnâ??t be dating himâ?¦ he is a waste of spaceâ?¦ plus I dont want you going to that party.. I know what teens get up to when there drunk

Girl: no it wont be like that. Iâ??ll come home about 10 and I wont drinkâ?¦ please mum can I go

Dad: listen to your motherâ?¦your not going your 16 and we dont want you hanging around with that luke and we donâ??t want you to get drunk

Girl: oh its so unfair

Mum: right me and your father is going out we will be back about 11â?¦ promise us both you wonâ??t go to that party

Girl: yeah I promise

Dad: ok where giving you our trust nowâ?¦ cya tonight bye

Girl: yeah ok , bye

So as the mum and dad went off the girl ran to her friendsâ?? party and saw her boyfriend

girl: hey luke

luke: hey glad u made itâ?¦

so after 1 hour in the party the girl had 4 vodkaS and her boyfriend had 5 vodkaS

girl: luke im going home now

luke: hey let me give you a lift

girl: no you been drinking

luke: donâ??t worry im a good driver plus only down the road

so they both got into the car and luke started to driveâ?¦ as he passed her house he was speeding up

girl: luke you just missed my houseâ?¦ slow down your going to fast

luke: donâ??t worry I know what im doing

so they where going about 80 mph. then a car was coming straight towords them

girl: OH MY GOD LUKE WATCH OUT!!

Then they hit the car full on. 5 hours later the girl woke up to find her self in hosbitle

Girl: nurse what happened

Nurse: you where in a car crash

Girl: is luke ok

Nurse: im sorry but he died during the crash

Girl: oh my godâ?¦ what about the other people in the other car where they ok

Nurse: no sadly they died to

Girl: I want my mum and dadâ?¦ phone themâ?¦ I WANT MY MUM AND DAD

Nurse: im really sorry but â?¦

Girl: but what

Nurse: they where the other people in the car. They died just minuets ago��.

â?? there is a lesson in this storyâ??

*work it out for your selfâ?¦and make sure something like this never happends to you*

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  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    Wow that's really sad 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    OMG!!! THAT WAS SOO SAD!!!

    Take Care

    CK

  • 18 years ago

    by gone back to him

    That was really good. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

    Love Always
    ~Baby~Girl~

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    You rock...this is funny f...ing funny. You are my sedated hero. I want your body.. I mean you sense of (not) humor.
    That was hilarious. I dont mean to be cruel.

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    You rock...this is funny f...ing funny. You are my sedated hero. I want your body.. I mean you sense of (not) humor.
    That was hilarious. I dont mean to be cruel.