Rain's Illusions

by JL   Feb 10, 2006


Rain pours down
Soaking into my skin
Healing my wounds
And the pain within

Thunder's in the distance
Along with flashing light
I don't care anymore
I'm trying with all my might

Sinking into mud
Hidden from the road
Trying to find a way out
Before I simply explode

Pain is building up,
Fighting is getting worse
Hurting more than ever
Trapped by life's curse

Blinded by tears,
Shaking from confusion
Everything I knew
Was just another illusion

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  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Thanks blaine =) and thanks Trisha ,
    Christie
    XXXXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I love the flow and the wording you used. Defiantly one my favorites you've written. Keep writing and take care.

    With love,

    *> : PainOfOne. blaine

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Great start!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    Awwww....hunni that is so flippin sad. Im here for you hun...i know that you do not know me but i will be here whenever you need me. If you ever want to talk you can email me at lonely_girl_2005@hotmail.com or trishamrshll@yahoo.com
    i will always be sure to return it. Your an awesome writer sweetie you truly are, i wish i was as talented as you. If you want to you can check out some of my poems. well chika i gotta go
    STAY STRONG

    ~Hurting Inside~
    xxXTrishaXxx

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