At the bar

by Juan   Feb 17, 2006


I walked into a bar,
and I was kinda busy,
but the bartener looked at me,
and she offered me whiskey.

I looked at her,
and asked for a beer,
but she said to me,
we're out of it dear.

She looked at me,
and she gave me a wink,
and I looked at her,
and I started to think.

Then I looked at her,
and she gave me a wine,
and what did I do?
I kissed her and
made her all mine.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Haha. Nice, well written. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Hehehe,, that easy ay, cool poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A brilliantly written funny poem... brought a smile to my face :] I thought it was very vell done. Great flow... nice rhyming.
    Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    The rhythem was a little shaky in some parts. Some lines seem to be missing a beat. Fix it up and it shud be great :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fits

    Damn, Your Poems keep getting better and better. 50 zillion out of 5 man!

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