When I Cut I Bleed

I enjoyed this poem. Though i felt it owuld of been better in sadness depression catagorie. Ok well this poem is a quite cliche subject on the whole. But cliche as it may be i can relate to it quite well. And well after i read the line; "I want to get rid of the pain and i succeed..." this is what i want to stay to you. The pain comes back doesnt it? It always does. It doesnt help you really. But i have noticed this poem is reallu old and submited and comparing it with your other poems i have to say you have improved as you used punctuation. Just work on the structure next time yeah? Still this poem is quite meotional and another peice taht people can relate to. You good att that arnt you? Lol. Keep writing. Thanks for comments. x

Good poem. The flow was good but to me there really wasn't a good 'story' behind it. other then that 5/5

I love this.. i can sence the expression in this one.. awesome job 5/5

I have read this one before but didnt comment it, but anyway 5/5. i know how you feel in this one *sigh*

Hey u took the words outa of my mouth i understand everything u described!!! u do good work!! and im glad u liked mine 2...oh and i added u 2 my favorites