Wow really good poem!! awesome job!!

I as well know what is like living under the bloodied knife

Really good peice, really well written. though it seems to finish very abruptly, other than that though a very honest and ell written peice.

5/5

Dark..really dark. I like it though. Cutting is a tough thing to handle these days but just understand there are people like you out there and it helps to talk with people.
Juls

This is so sad. I can completey relate to this. An amazing poem, very sad and emotional. I love it.

I'm starting not to like self harm poems much anymore.. cause they all basically say the same thing. But.. I liked this one. I used to self harm and the things you expressed in this poem was almost exactly how I'd feel. Very good write. Keep it up! 5/5

`Talee. xx.

Hey i really like dis one its great thanks for commenting mine

Another great poem. painful yet somehow compellling xx

"What I've gone through...
Nobody knows it all
They see the fake me
Never seeing as I fall"

I really really liked that particular portion of this poem. This was a brilliantly written poem, tho short. Greath flow and everything. 5/5