No Freedom

by MaSkEdSoUl   Feb 23, 2006


Can't do anything,
Wanting to have more freedom,
Them wanting to know who I hang out with, who I talk to on the phone, where I'm going.

Getting sick of all this,
Wanting to leave,
Escape from these people.
Not letting me have any freedom,
What kind of life is that?
Having to explain myself, to tell them everything that goes on in my life.

Can I ever escape this?
Can I ever get the freedom I want?
I think about running away,
But what good would that do?
Living on the street is no good life.
Hoping one day I can leave,
Live the life I want,
But for now, all I can do is dream...

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  • 16 years ago

    by sliim

    Sooo true im goin through this now with my mom im 18 now i should have more freedom...it freakin sucks as much things i do to make her happy =/...

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    To me I see it as freedom is earned throughout the years.....so don't abuse your chances meaning don't do anything stupid that could mess it all up (like some of my mistakes) the poem was good and many people could relate with it's meaning but your poems are not flowing the way they could.

    ~Retniapdoolb~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jasmine

    I really like this it's really good and i can relate to this. keep going and if you really get tired then just act out.

  • 18 years ago

    by anna

    Good poem and it's expressive... but like the other said it's a matter of time which u can be mature enough .... don't be upset things ganna change later on

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ghostship Fidelity-

    This poem reminds me of my past thoughts. Freedom will come in time *winks*.

    But as for the flow. I have to agree with the other commentors about the flow of things. Just do some rewording and rearranging and this poem will be perfect.

    Hope I helped some, :-)

    -Tony

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