Heartache (Rictameter)

by Lu   Feb 25, 2006


Heartache
tears burning hot
my fragile heart falling
a pain stricken soul lost,alone
my world broken,shattered into pieces
hide from the pain of memories
can't move on without you
crushing torment
Heartache

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Awesome! I was gonna write a rictameter starting with the word heartache but I forgot all about it.
    You wrote this beautifully. I especially like the line "crushing torment". That phrase sums up heartache perfectly.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

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