Yeah, I think we are all hunting for that person, but hunting sounds a but violent when you are talking about live, you know? Maybe concider changing it to searching? Just a thought. A very truthful poem with a message to say. I hope you get the chance to find the person who makes your world complete, and if you do maybe there will still be hope for me, lol. Best of luck.

-Tainted Mikochan

Beautiful! We all search for love, not all will find it, but we're looking for the other half of our soul. And we'll always look because it's worth it. Nicely put. Awesome job!

I loved it, I thought it was one of your most finest!

I love it hun! xox 5/5 xox

I think its perfect the way it is. Deserves nothing but a 5/5 for sure. Keep writing and take care.

With love,

*> : PainOfOne - blaine

I think you might want to fix those site errors and maybe break it up a bit to improve the flow. You have really nice ideas and great word choice/imagery. It just seems all pushed together :)

This was beautiful. the ending is good =) and you have some very good ideas.

Kat

Almost a poetic textbook definition. Wonderful write.
As always~ Kate

Beautifuly written words and stnzas completely one of the BEST poems I have ever read! The words just flew right out of your heart and all hearts onto the page to describe a feeling that has never been described so vividly and real! Masterful work, simply MASTERFUL! ^_^

I love this poem heads up u got talent

Wow..this is such a powerful poem!