Comments : Scared

  • 14 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem hun lot of emotion put in2 it, thanks 4 your comment meant alot, im also sorry 4 your loss if you eva need 2 talk im here take care o your self hun 5/5 sarah x

  • 14 years ago

    by Nichole

    Thank you for the comment. I love your poems I have read. I feel kinda like u. I don't wanna say I feel exactly like you because noone can feel the same pains.. But keep up the good work.

  • 14 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    First of all, I want to thank you for your comment on my poem. Second of all, this poem was very touching. I do face each of those fears each and every day. I have suffered a lot of losses in my life. And if you ever feel like talking, just send me a message and I will get back to you asap. keep writing, girl, you have potential.

    ~BJ~

  • 13 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    I loved this...i can relate to it so much...i definitly fear those things...5/5.

  • 13 years ago

    by Driver

    I thikn this was a good one. some people cant confess their fears, you can. i think thats a good trait. nicely done
    Driver

  • 13 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow this is really good and i can defiantly relate to this poem very much.
    you did such a wonderful job writing it.
    it's really sad but greatly written.
    keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 13 years ago

    by X2892

    To me itz like ok n stuff n u did better 1's before but still good 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Usually I choose which line i like best.. but you I like them all.
    Your style of writing is very different from others. Unique. Yet Amazing! I think I'm gonna add you to my favorites.. lets see what else you have stored up for me.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    In a way i am scared of most of the things... here... this was a nice poem... keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by donna

    I'm scared of all these things other than the dark. Although I don't like walking down dark lonely streets on my own, so guess I am a little afraid of the dark *doh

    Very sad poem, but very well expressed. Sometime's it just feels like everything and nothing scares us, I'm sure a lot of people can relate to these fears.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 13 years ago

    by awww

    Expressed it so well... and yes i have the same fears... maybe aside from the dark... or its literal meaning... but what it symbolizes i am afraid of... i really got hit in this line:

    I'm scared of not being accepted.

    because thats all im asking... im not even asking for the person to return my feelings.. just accept it... great write! keep writing!

    ~angel~

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I feel im the one in this situationg.. actlually im also like this scared of everything.. well just keep on writing all what u feel and what comes in ur mind and in ur heart 5/5
    god bless

  • 13 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    You forgot. " i'm scared i'll always
    be scare

  • 13 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    I read your post in my discussion, im srry you feel this way but it isn't your fault, I should know, my family is like that to me too. Awesome poem by the way

    Tony :D love ya
    comment on some of my poems if you have time plz

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this.
    It was filled with emotion which is why I enjoyed it so much, I liked the wording particularly.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    I was reading a long and thinking that if you could just change the "I'm scared of the......." lines and add variety this poem would be 5 times as better. then when i got to the bottom i realized what a good poem this could be if you just changed it up a little and it doesnt even have to ryme as long as you did that. although that would make it even better. lots of love, kayla**keep strong and don't give up hope**

  • 13 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    The world is definately scary, your not wrong there, i liked this one alot. simple and straight to the point.

    much love and many kisses,
    bex