First of all, I want to thank you for your comment on my poem. Second of all, this poem was very touching. I do face each of those fears each and every day. I have suffered a lot of losses in my life. And if you ever feel like talking, just send me a message and I will get back to you asap. keep writing, girl, you have potential.
Usually I choose which line i like best.. but you I like them all.
Your style of writing is very different from others. Unique. Yet Amazing! I think I'm gonna add you to my favorites.. lets see what else you have stored up for me.
13 years ago
by Robie Lincer
In a way i am scared of most of the things... here... this was a nice poem... keep it up
I was reading a long and thinking that if you could just change the "I'm scared of the......." lines and add variety this poem would be 5 times as better. then when i got to the bottom i realized what a good poem this could be if you just changed it up a little and it doesnt even have to ryme as long as you did that. although that would make it even better. lots of love, kayla**keep strong and don't give up hope**