Pretending.

by Luke   Feb 28, 2006


Lets leave it at that..
let it be..
take our time..
wait and see..

It was so good..
now it's time..
to say let go..
in every rhyme..

i'll say it now..
in the best way..
in this poem..
to read anotherday..

I hope you see..
i hope you understand..
i don't want to hurt..
none of this was planned..

You'll still be close..
a good close friend..
but this love we have..
has turned so pretend.

© of Luke/Tuffguypr Febuary 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    I wish i could write like you man you are soo good....!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Yes ! Luke
    I can definatly see how much your poetry has grown in the last few days . Becoming stronger and more powerful . I know your style at the beginning was a trade mark with the caps but it looks so wonderful now . I might just capitalize the I's in this one...but that is just my opnion ...*S*
    And maybe a space between anotherday ...

    I find poems with loads of caps really take away from the poem leaving it hard to read and losing alot of meaning .

    You are improving greatly day by day Luke ! Keep up the great work and always keep a pen close by ....you never know when a great idea for a poem will come along ...

    Your last stanza is my absolute favorite .

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hat Damn Luke, you've done it...... very well done sweetie. You are quick to learn, I am proud of you. Wonderful write, very well expressed, the flow and rhyme are perfect.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Karen Simpson

    I love it, great work... 5/5 ^_^

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