Whisper in my ear..

by Luke   Apr 27, 2006


Soo much darkness..
No-one else can see..
The depression that floats..
Right there over me..

Soo many days..
Spent sitting alone..
Looking at your face..
On my mobile phone..

So many nights..
Spent doing the same..
Untill downstairs..
My feet slowly came..

I reached the kitchen..
My life such a mess..
The vision of you..
With him in that dress..

I reach out stretched..
The knife in my sight..
I'll go upstairs..
Sit and cry all night..

But it seems to move..
Move out of my grip..
Somethings telling me..
She'll mend that big rip..

Someones voice..
Whispering in my ear..
\"Don\'t do it Luke\"..
I\'ll always be here..

I Listen to the voice..
Sit slumped in a state..
Havn\'t seen food..
Not a bowl or a plate..

I'm all alone..
Sat in a worse heap..
But this voice in my head..
I\'ve got to keep..

(c) of Luke 27th April 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by gaby

    Hey look love the poem
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  • 17 years ago

    by courtz; youliedyoubrokemyheart

    Hey thats really good!! i like ur style!! kepp writing!!

    love ya .x.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Depression gets many of us down and if it wasn't for the "little voice" in our heads, some of us wouldn't be here to write about it. Many emotions are running wild in this write, well done Luke. Stay strong and know that I'm here if you ever need to talk. Hugs and Love to ya sweetie.......

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylalala

    I was depressed you havent written in so long but it was all worth the wait... Nice job
    XxKaylaxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Damn good writing! That "little voice" is a necessity. The realistic, life like approach to this poem is fabulous.

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