You.

by Lauren G.   Mar 1, 2006


You.
Mysterious.
The lock of my gaze could not be broken even if you were the sun and I was blinded by your radiance.
To loose my sight looking at you is far better
Than to have never laid my eyes upon true beauty.
A vision of perfection that envokes so much emotion
That tears dwell in my eyes

You.
Enticing.
As I exist in this dream world with you so near
I can feel your presence enclosing
Until all I can think, feel, and breathe is you
You're like a cool breeze in the heat
Invigorating and refreshing.
I need you like I've never needed anything before.

You.
Rare.
I can search your soul with one glimpse
A connection beyond words or feelings.
Like I've known you my entire life.
Never have I experienced this before.
I would do anything in my power
Just to be everything you want.

You.
Alluring.
My desire is burning like a brilliant fire
With you the air that keeps me alive and breathing.
My passions rise and crash like waves upon the shore
I can feel you like music beating in my heart and in my veins.
Pulsing in a melodic trance
I could listen to you until time stops.

You.
Beautiful.
Your smile fills my thoughts like the clouds fill the sky.
It's impossible to think of anything else
Stars could fall and crash around me
Serenity and peacefulness causing me to be oblivious
Feeling like the world is moving in slow motion
Overwhelmed my emotions of love and happiness
My feet are no longer standing on this spinning ground.

You.
I would melt to be held in your arms.
I would lose myself in your kiss.
I would be in heaven to gaze into your eyes.
And my heart would burst with one smile.
I want steal your heart and replace it with mine.
Oh how I want you to want me
You.
My love.
You.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Nice write. I liked how you set it out it is different and I also liked how you didn't have to fall back into a rhyming scheme, this works very well and has it's own flow without needing to rhyme. You imagery is well written and picturesque, and you idolize this person without sounding over-the-top of cliched. I can also get a real sense of desire from this. Overall nice write :)