Just for a bit of change

by Bhavin   Mar 3, 2006


I saw you leaving on your way, just like I always do.
Your face kept looking so fresh, just like the morning dew.
You walked and beamed at everyone, but maybe you forgot me.
I wanted to see your pretty face, but you were in a hurry to flee.
I wished that you would see me, though from a long range.
I hoped that you would talk to me, just for a bit of change.

Perhaps God heard my wish, that He made you my close friend.
We started sharing those anecdotes, that started our laughing trend.
You left an impression in my heart, though I kept denying.
Your happiness kept making my day, I felt as if I was flying.
I gave you a hint of my feelings, with a hope you too would exchange.
I wished you too reciprocated to me, just for a bit of change.

Days flew and passed into months, I felt you were a part of me.
As soon as I started thinking of you, it made me feel happy and glee.
I gathered courage to express my love, but your news changed my mind.
You said you got your Mr. Perfect, and that made me retract behind.
My heart cried hard as I lost you, but my smile remained unchanged.
I wished you would have waited for me, just for a bit of change.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great poem that i can relate with, It is a great poem with a sad story, I feel like we both write for the same perpose and we been through similar kind of love. your poems are so great, and you are a great poet. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Bhavin, this is a beautiful poem - very well written and strong with emotions.

    thank you very much for looking up my work and asking me to guide you. Bhavin, I feel honoured that you asked me to do this for you.

    i wish you all the very best to make your dreams come true. just keep trying, write from the very bottom of your heart and you will definitely make it to the very top.

    there are some great poets on this site. check them out as often as possible because there is so much we can learn from each of them.

    i also think you have a style of your own - so just let it flow and you will see that you really grow with each poem you write.

    aapke compliments ke liye bahut shukrya. will keep coming back to read more of your work

    good luck and peace
    shobhana